Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt

"Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com> Thu, 05 May 2016 12:24 UTC

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From: "Eric Voit (evoit)" <evoit@cisco.com>
To: Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>, Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com>, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr>
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> > The authors are in California.  You will not see their response until
> > after the IESG meeting.
> 
> That's fine :-)
> 
> As long as somebody (like the shepherd) remembers where we are with this
> document, and remembers to take editorial stuff into account :-)

Somehow I missed fixing Francis' editorial nits.  I made the changes in the '-08' version I have on my screen.  I will publish once I close out any other comments.

Eric
 
> Jari