[Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt
Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> Wed, 04 May 2016 14:01 UTC
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please treat these comments just like any other last call comments. For more information, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>. Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt Reviewer: Francis Dupont Review Date: 20160429 IETF LC End Date: 20160429 IESG Telechat date: 20160505 Summary: Ready Major issues: None Minor issues: None Nits/editorial comments: - Abstract page 1, 4.1 page 7 and 4.2.2 page 9: i.e. -> i.e., - ToC page 2 and 2.2 page 5: variants -> Variants - ToC page 2 and 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments - 2.2 page 5: software[sacm-requirements] -> software [sacm-requirements] Regards Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
- [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requi… Francis Dupont
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Susan Hares
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Eric Voit (evoit)
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Jari Arkko
- Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-r… Francis Dupont