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Re: [Gen-art] review of draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt

Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net> Thu, 05 May 2016 10:08 UTC

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Thanks for your review, Francis. Authors, did you see the suggested editorial nits?

Jari

On 04 May 2016, at 09:51, Francis Dupont <Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr> wrote:

> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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> Document: draft-ietf-i2rs-pub-sub-requirements-06.txt
> Reviewer: Francis Dupont
> Review Date: 20160429
> IETF LC End Date: 20160429
> IESG Telechat date: 20160505
> 
> Summary: Ready
> 
> Major issues: None
> 
> Minor issues: None
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> - Abstract page 1, 4.1 page 7 and 4.2.2 page 9: i.e. -> i.e.,
> 
> - ToC page 2 and 2.2 page 5: variants -> Variants
> 
> - ToC page 2 and 7 page 14: Acknowledgements -> Acknowledgments
> 
> - 2.2 page 5: software[sacm-requirements] -> software [sacm-requirements]
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> Regards
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> Francis.Dupont@fdupont.fr
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