[Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Sun, 03 August 2014 18:30 UTC

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Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments 
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Document: draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05
Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov
Review Date: 3 August 2014
IETF LC End Date: 21 July 2014
IESG Telechat date: 7 August 2014

Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC.
[Ready with nits]

Major issues: None

Minor issues:

Section 6.4: who allocated opcodes? I.e. is there a registry?

Nits:

I think it would be better to say that all "Reserved" fields are set to 
0 by the sender and ignored by the receiver.