Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05
Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Mon, 04 August 2014 17:19 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05
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On 04/08/2014 18:16, Donald Eastlake wrote: > Hi Alexey, Hi Donald, > On Sun, Aug 3, 2014 at 2:30 PM, Alexey Melnikov > <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> wrote: >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq> >> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments you >> may receive. >> >> Document: draft-ietf-trill-loss-delay-05 >> Reviewer: Alexey Melnikov >> Review Date: 3 August 2014 >> IETF LC End Date: 21 July 2014 >> IESG Telechat date: 7 August 2014 >> >> Summary: This draft is ready for publication as a Standards Track RFC. >> [Ready with nits] >> >> Major issues: None >> >> Minor issues: >> >> Section 6.4: who allocated opcodes? I.e. is there a registry? > These OAM OpCodes were created by and originally all under the control > of IEEE 802.1; however, 802.1 allocated the block of 32 OpCodes from > 32 to 63 to ITU-T as documented in [802.1Q]. I don't think ITU-T > maintains an explicit registry other than the listing of assigned > OpCodes out of their range that appears in [Y.1731] but I could be > wrong. > > Perhaps a sentence could be added to the end of Section 6.4 such as > "These OpCodes are from the range of values that has been allocated by > IEEE 802.1 [802.1Q] for control by ITU-T." I think that would be very helpful. Otherwise there is a question why there is no IANA registry for these and your extra sentence would address that. >> Nits: >> >> I think it would be better to say that all "Reserved" fields are set to 0 by >> the sender and ignored by the receiver. > I'll check with the other authors on that. Thank you.
- [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-trill-l… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tri… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tri… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tri… Donald Eastlake
- Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART LC review of draft-ietf-tri… Jari Arkko