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Alissa Cooper <alissa@cooperw.in> Thu, 10 September 2020 00:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] [lamps] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03
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Francesca, thanks for your review. Mohit, thanks for your response. I entered a No Objection ballot.

Alissa


> On Sep 2, 2020, at 11:38 AM, Mohit Sahni <mohit06jan@gmail.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi Francesca,
> Thanks for the comments, I will make these changes. 
> 
> Regards,
> Mohit 
> 
> On Wed, Sep 2, 2020 at 2:54 AM Francesca Palombini via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review result: Ready with Nits
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair.  Please treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
> 
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-lamps-ocsp-nonce-03
> Reviewer: Francesca Palombini
> Review Date: 2020-09-02
> IETF LC End Date: 2020-09-02
> IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat
> 
> Summary: This draft is basically ready for publication, but has nits that
> should be fixed before publication.
> 
> Major issues: -
> 
> Minor issues: -
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
> 
> Section 1:
> OLD:
> This extension was
>    previously defined in section 4.1.1 of [RFC6960]
> NEW:
> This extension was
>    previously defined in section 4.4.1 of [RFC6960]
> 
> Section 2:
> The message format for the OCSP request and response is defined in
>    the [RFC6960].  It also defines the standard extensions for OCSP
>    messages based on the extension model employed in X.509 version 3
>    certificates (see [RFC5280]).
> 
> "It" in the second sentence is ambiguous, I think it would be better to replace
> with "[RFC6960]".
> 
> 
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