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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02

Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Tue, 04 October 2016 16:53 UTC

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From: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>, Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
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Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02
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Hi,

I submitted a new version (-05) of the draft, with the new title.

Regards,

Christer

From: Christer Holmberg [mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com]
Sent: 04 October 2016 18:41
To: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com>
Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update.all@ietf.org; gen-art@ietf.org
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02

Hi,

>I was just having a look at the updated draft - the changes are fine AFAICS.
>
>However, looking at it again, I think a more informative title would not go >amiss.  How about:
>
> Clarifications to SDP offer/answer Negotiations in RFC 5761
>
>Sorry - should have noticed on previous pass.

Don’t worry – I agree a more informative title would be useful :)

What about “RFC 5761 SDP Offer/Answer Clarifications”?

Regards,

Christer




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From: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com<mailto:elwynd@dial.pipex.com>>
Date: 16/09/2016 23:45 (GMT+00:00)
To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com<mailto:christer.holmberg@ericsson.com>>
Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update.all@ietf.org>, gen-art@ietf.org<mailto:gen-art@ietf.org>
Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02

Hi Christer.

Thanks.  That's fine.

Cheers,
Elwyn



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