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Re: [Gen-art] Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02

Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Tue, 04 October 2016 15:10 UTC

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Hi, Christer.
I was just having a look at the updated draft - the changes are fine AFAICS.
However, looking at it again, I think a more informative title would not go amiss.  How about:
 Clarifications to SDP offer/answer Negotiations in RFC 5761
Sorry - should have noticed on previous pass.
Cheers,Elwyn

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-------- Original message --------From: Elwyn Davies <elwynd@dial.pipex.com> Date: 16/09/2016  23:45  (GMT+00:00) To: Christer Holmberg <christer.holmberg@ericsson.com> Cc: draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update.all@ietf.org, gen-art@ietf.org Subject: RE: Gen-art LC review of draft-ietf-avtcore-5761-update-02 
Hi Christer.
Thanks.  That's fine.
Cheers,Elwyn


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