Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dime-congestion-flow-attributes-01

"Black, David" <david.black@emc.com> Thu, 11 June 2015 21:35 UTC

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From: "Black, David" <david.black@emc.com>
To: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>, Jari Arkko <jari.arkko@piuha.net>
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They already have - my comment made it into Martin's Discuss for this draft, accompanied by a supporting comment from Spencer ;-).

Thanks,
--David

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gen-art [mailto:gen-art-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Brian E Carpenter
> Sent: Thursday, June 11, 2015 4:25 PM
> To: Jari Arkko
> Cc: mls.ietf@gmail.com; General Area Review Team; draft-ietf-dime-congestion-
> flow-attributes.all@ietf.org; spencerdawkins.ietf@gmail.com
> Subject: Re: [Gen-art] Gen-ART Last Call review of draft-ietf-dime-congestion-
> flow-attributes-01
> 
> You're welcome. I hope that the Transport ADs are looking at
> David Black's comment, however.
> 
> Regards
>    Brian
> 
> On 11/06/2015 21:41, Jari Arkko wrote:
> > Thank you Brian for your review.
> >
> > Jari
> >
> > On 25 May 2015, at 06:59, Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
> wrote:
> >
> >> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on
> >> Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at
> >> <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> >>
> >> Please resolve these comments along with any other Last Call comments
> >> you may receive.
> >>
> >> Document: draft-ietf-dime-congestion-flow-attributes-01.txt
> >> Reviewer: Brian Carpenter
> >> Review Date: 2015-05-25
> >> IETF LC End Date: 2015-06-01
> >> IESG Telechat date:
> >>
> >> Summary:  Ready
> >> --------
> >>
> >> Comment:
> >> --------
> >>
> >> This is a clear and well-written document. I do have two comments, however:
> >> 1) I suggest that somebody with ECN smarts should glance at it (e.g. David
> Black).
> >> 2) The shepherd suggests in the writeup that it should formally update RFC
> 5777.
> >> But since it describes optional extensions to RFC 5777 that are strictly
> compatible,
> >> I don't think that's right.
> >>
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