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Ronald Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net> Tue, 15 December 2015 21:01 UTC

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From: Ronald Bonica <rbonica@juniper.net>
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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. For background on Gen-ART, please see the FAQ at <http://wiki.tools.ietf.org/area/gen/trac/wiki/GenArtfaq>

Document:                                      draft-ietf-pals-congcons-01
Reviewer:                                        Ron Bonica
Review Date:                                  2015-12-15
IETF LC End Date:                          2015-12-15
IETF Telechat Date:                      TBD

Summary:          This document is ready for publication

In summary, draft-ietf-congcons-01:

- applies only to pseudowires that run over something other than MPLS (e.g., GRE)
- concludes that no additional mechanisms are needed for elastic pseudowires
- concludes that an inelastic pseudowire MAY shutdown when it experiences higher-than-acceptable loss, latency or jitter
- observes that that for TDM PWs, as loss rate increases, higher-than-acceptable loss generally occurs before the fixed-rate TDM PW could cause serious problems for competing congestion-responsive traffic
- Therefore, no additional mechanisms are needed for inelastic pseudowires, either

I see nothing objectionable in the draft. However, its scope is extremely limited and it conclusions are not earthshattering. Nonetheless, the work is sound and deserves publication.
                    
Major Issues: None

Minor Issues: None

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Ron Bonica