[Gen-art] Telechat review of draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-12

"Matt Miller (mamille2)" <mamille2@cisco.com> Wed, 16 December 2015 22:34 UTC

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I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
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Document: draft-ietf-softwire-dslite-mib-12
Reviewer: Matthew A. Miller
Review Date: 2015-12-16
IETF LC End Date: 2015-11-15
IESG Telechat date: 2015-12-17

Summary: ready for publication as a Standards Track document.

I had reviewed the preceding version; that review can be found here:
< http://www.ietf.org/mail-archive/web/gen-art/current/msg12525.html >

This vision addressed all my concerns from the previous review.  I have
no other concerns.

Major issues:

NONE

Minor issues:

NONE

Nits/editorial comments:

NONE


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Matt Miller
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