Re: [Hipsec] WGLC: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal

Miika Komu <miika.komu@ericsson.com> Fri, 12 February 2016 20:59 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Hipsec] WGLC: draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal
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Hi,

On 01/29/2016 02:32 PM, Gonzalo Camarillo wrote:
> Hi,
>
> I would like to start a WGLC on the following draft. This WGLC will end
> on February 12th:
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-hip-native-nat-traversal/
>
> Please, send your comments to this list.

in general, the draft should have a short intro to the NAT traversal 
procedure and re-introduce some terms even though it all is specified in 
RFC5770. This would make the draft a bit easier to read. I have also 
some other nits which I'll send a bit later.