Re: [I2nsf] need more review and support to close the WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm

Sue,
Thanks for your thorough review and evaluation on the Consumer-Facing
Interface YANG Data Model:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-22

As Sue said, the YANG module of this Consumer-Facing Interface data model
has been proved
through many IETF I2NSF hackathon projects.
This time my SKKU team demonstrated the mature functionality of Security
Policy Translator
over this Consumer-Facing Interface YANG data model.

- Slides of IETF-114 I2NSF Hackathon Project

https://github.com/IETF-Hackathon/ietf114-project-presentations/blob/main/IETF114-I2NSF-Hackathon-Project-20220724.pdf

- Github Repository of IETF-114 I2NSF Hackathon Project

https://github.com/jaehoonpaul/i2nsf-framework/tree/master/Hackathon-114/react

- Demo Video Clip of IETF-114 I2NSF Hackathon Project
  https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_y6xLtUXBzw

I believe that this draft is ready to move toward the IESG evaluation.

Thanks.

Best Regards,
Paul

On Tue, Jul 26, 2022 at 7:56 AM Susan Hares <shares@ndzh.com> wrote:

> Linda and I2NSF:
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> Review of draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-inteface-dm.
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> Status: Ready to publish
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> Textual Comments:  The write-up for this data model has excellent clarity
> in the English text.
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> Review Question: Right level of detail?  Yes – Excellent choices on
> detail.
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> One of the questions from the Security Ads have asked about this model is
> whether the level of detail in this model is sufficient.  My review of this
> model is that it hits a good balance for a consumer-facing model.  The
> challenge in the customer-facing model is to provide enough information to
> handle the grouping of information into a common set of primitives.   This
> group appears to be at the right level of detail.
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> Most of the I2NSF enabled security devices are network security devices
> that have a combination of functions (routing, firewall, accounting) as
> part of network access and control.  These devices will be found on the
> edge of network provider or within enterprise networks.  If these devices
> are successful there, this technology could move toward data centers.
> However, IMHO I do not thing that will be first.
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> The Yang module for the customer interface is a challenging creation
> because it must be specific enough to group the information but leave some
> flexibility to be tailored for different deployments.  From my experience
> in creating a routing/switch/firewall, this appears to have the right
> balance.
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> Yang module checks:  All my manual check on this Yang module did not find
> a problem.  I did not run it through automatic checks.
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> Note for AD:  Several of the original reviews for this module included
> reviews of the hackathon code with feedback.  I have been aware of the
> hackathon early results.  I believe several people gave early feedback
> based on the prototypes.   If you did not see list discussion, it was
> because the discussions occurred in review of prototype code.
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> I hope this helps.
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> Sue Hares
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> *From:* I2nsf <i2nsf-bounces@ietf.org> *On Behalf Of * Linda Dunbar
> *Sent:* Tuesday, July 12, 2022 1:17 PM
> *To:* i2nsf@ietf.org
> *Subject:* [I2nsf] need more review and support to close the WGLC for
> draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm
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> I2NF WG,
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> draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm WGLC was inconclusive due to
> lack of support and some LC comments not properly addressed. There appeared
> to be limited reviews of the document during the WGLC
>
> See the discussion history: [I2nsf] WGLC for
> draft-ietf-i2nsf-consumer-facing-interface-dm-16
> <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/i2nsf/MFOohjnJ9fbylLB9eyccMRhrp04/>
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> To proceed to publication more reviews and support from the WG for
> publication is needed.
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> We really appreciate more people reviewing the document, especially the
> people who are not the authors.
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> Thank you
>
> Linda Dunbar
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