Re: [I2nsf] Closing the WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16

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Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Closing the WGLC for draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16
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On 04/10/2021 13:57, Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong wrote:
> Hi Tom,
> Thanks for your quick review.
>
> I will replace ecn with ece (ECN-Echo) as a TCP flag for RFC793-bis.

Paul

-20 looks good in that regard

Tom Petch

> Thanks.
>
> Best Regards,
> Paul
>
> 2021년 10월 4일 (월) 오후 6:25, tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>님이 작성:
>
>> From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>
>> Sent: 29 September 2021 05:07
>> Hi Tom,
>> Patrick and I have addressed your comments on the I2NSF Capability YANG
>> Data Model draft:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-19
>>
>> I attach the revision letter.
>>
>> <tp>
>> Paul
>>
>> I note your decision to drop RFC793 and reference RFC793-bis; seems like a
>> timely change but since RFC793 was  a Normative Reference, then I think
>> that 793-bis needs to be as well.  (Since that I-D is being reviewed by the
>> IESG, I am sure it will soon progress and so will not hold up the I2NSF
>> I-D).
>>
>> I note that the in TCP flags of 793-bis there is no 'ecn', rather 'ece'.
>> I think that this will need changing in nsf-facing-interface-dm
>>
>>
>> Tom Petch
>>
>> Thanks.
>>
>> Best Regards,
>> Paul
>>
>>
>> On Wed, Sep 22, 2021 at 6:26 PM tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com<mailto:
>> ietfa@btconnect.com>> wrote:
>>
>> From: Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong <jaehoon.paul@gmail.com<mailto:
>> jaehoon.paul@gmail.com>>
>> Sent: 15 September 2021 17:39
>> To: tom petch
>> Cc: Linda Dunbar; Yoav Nir; Roman Danyliw; Paul Wouters; i2nsf@ietf.org
>> <mailto:i2nsf@ietf.org>; Patrick Lingga; Mr. Jaehoon Paul Jeong
>> Subject: Re: [I2nsf] Closing the WGLC for
>> draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-16
>>
>> Hi Tom,
>> Here is the revision to reflect your comments on the I2NSF Capability Data
>> Model:
>>
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-i2nsf-capability-data-model-18
>>
>> I attach the revision letter.
>>
>> <tp
>> Paul
>>
>> Getting there.
>>