Re: [icnrg] New Version Notification for draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-01.txt

[Ravi Ravindran <[e-mail]>]

Thanks Thomas, we will address these corrections and comments in the next revision.

Regards,
Ravi

From: Jagodits, Thomas [mailto:[e-mail]]
Sent: Monday, May 09, 2016 6:50 AM
To: Dirk Kutscher; Rahman, Akbar; Ravi Ravindran; [e-mail]
Subject: RE: New Version Notification for draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-01.txt


Hi,



Some minor comments that are mostly of editorial nature:

a)       [5.7] "..content that has not yet been published yet should also.." -> "..content that has not been published yet should also.."

b)      [2.6] Clause (4) could apply to any of the previous ones  that are listed. Need clarification why this is called out separately.

c)      [2.7 - Last sentence] A better wording would be: "Further the platform should incorporate caching, content security/privacy, and regulatory considerations".

d)      [2.8] Possibly one aspect that should be spelled out is granularity. The second paragraph mentions physical objects but one probably also wants to refer to logical entities (e.g. see 5.1).

e)      [5.4 - first bullet] This sentence should be reworded: "Here, the main challenge is to keep the ICN router state required to route/forward data low."

f)       [6.] The challenges listed in the Appendix are generic to IoT, not all the listed challenges apply to ICN.



Regards,

Thomas Jagodits



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From: icnrg [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of Dirk Kutscher
Sent: Tuesday, May 03, 2016 12:17 PM
To: Rahman, Akbar; Ravi Ravindran; [e-mail]
Subject: Re: [icnrg] New Version Notification for draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-01.txt



Hi Akbar and all,



Thanks for looking into it.



All, the purpose of RG documents is that they address topics that are of sufficiently broad interest that warrants allocating meeting air time and reviewing cycles in the future.



So far, we have not seen that interest in the group.



Let's try to clarify that and see how we can move on the document. Can people (who are not in the set of draft authors) express their views on how to move on with this? If you have other comments on the draft and/or the topic of IoT, please speak up as well.



Thanks,

Chairs





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> 01.txt

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> Hi Dirk/Ravi,

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> I read the update and was satisfied that my comments were addressed.

> I support adopting it as an RG document.

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> Best Regards,

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> Akbar

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> Subject: Re: [icnrg] New Version Notification for

> draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot- requirements-01.txt

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> Thanks, Ravi.

>

> We talked about adopting this one as an RG document.

>

> https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-01

>

> Can we get some opinions from people who have read it (and that are

> not in the authors group)?

>

> We would like to understand whether people think that this is in a

> mature enough state and whether it's sufficiently comprehensive to be

> adopted as an RG document and moved towards Informational RFC publication later.

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> Thanks,

> Dirk

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> > From: icnrg [mailto:[e-mail]] On Behalf Of Ravi

> > Ravindran

> > Sent: Samstag, 23. April 2016 02:05

> > To: [e-mail]<mailto:[e-mail]>

> > Subject: [icnrg] New Version Notification for

> > draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot- requirements-01.txt

> >

> > Dear All,

> >

> > Based on the comments from the mailing list we have updated the

> > ICN-IoT requirements draft.

> >

> > Following are the updates to the draft:

> >

> > 1. Sections 2.10&5.6 have been updated based on Yuansong's

> > contributions and references.

> >

> > 2. Sections 3.2&2.9 have been updated to address Akbar's comments.

> >

> > 3. A new Section 2.13 on IoT platform management challenge has been

> > added, and Sections 2.3,5.7&6.3 have been updated to address

> > Thomas's

> comments.

> >

> > 4. Sections 2.5&6.4 have been updated to address Bastiaan's comments.

> >

> > More comments are welcome for improving this contribution.

> >

> > Regards,

> > Ravi

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> >

> >

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> > To: Dipankar Raychadhuri; Yanyong Zhang; Emmanuel Baccelli; Jeff

> > Burke; Ravi Ravindran; GQ Wang; Olov Schelen; Bengt Ahlgren; Luigi

> > Alfredo Grieco

> > Subject: New Version Notification for

> > draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-

> > 01.txt

> >

> >

> > A new version of I-D, draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements-01.txt

> > has been successfully submitted by Ravishankar Ravindran and posted

> > to the IETF repository.

> >

> > Name:         draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-requirements

> > Revision:     01

> > Title:                Requirements and Challenges for IoT over ICN

> > Document date:        2016-04-22

> > Group:                Individual Submission

> > Pages:                39

> > URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-

> > requirements-01.txt

> > Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-

> > requirements/

> > Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-

> requirements-

> > 01

> > Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-zhang-icnrg-icniot-

> > requirements-01

> >

> > Abstract:

> >    The Internet of Things (IoT) promises to connect billions of objects

> >    to the Internet.  After deploying many stand-alone IoT systems in

> >    different domains, the current trend is to develop a common, "thin

> >    waist" of protocols forming a horizontal unified, defragmented IoT

> >    platform.  Such a platform will make objects accessible to

> >    applications across organizations and domains.  Towards this goal,

> >    quite a few proposals have been made to build a unified host-centric

> >    IoT platform as an overlay on top of today's host-centric Internet.

> >    However, there is a fundamental mismatch between the host-centric

> >    nature of todays Internet and the information-centric nature of the

> >    IoT system.  To address this mismatch, we propose to build a common

> >    set of protocols and services, which form an IoT platform, based on

> >    the Information Centric Network (ICN) architecture, which we call

> >    ICN-IoT.  ICN-IoT leverages the salient features of ICN, and thus

> >    provides seamless mobility support, security, scalability, and

> >    efficient content and service delivery.

> >

> >    This draft describes representative IoT requirements and ICN

> >    challenges to realize a unified ICN-IoT framework.  Towards this, we

> >    first identify a list of important requirements which a unified IoT

> >    architecture should have to support tens of billions of objects, then

> >    we discuss how the current IP-IoT overlay fails to meet these

> >    requirements, followed by discussion on suitability of ICN for IoT.

> >

> >    Though we see most of the IoT requirements can be met by ICN, we

> >    discuss specific challenges ICN has to address to satisfy them.  Then

> >    we provide discussion of popular IoT scenarios including the "smart"

> >    home, campus, grid, transportation infrastructure, healthcare,

> >    Education, and Entertainment for completeness, as specific scenarios

> >    requires appropriate design choices and architectural considerations

> >    towards developing an ICN-IoT solution.

> >

> >

> >

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