Re: [Idr] Last Call on draft-ietf-idr-rfc2796bis-00.txt

Hi, Jeff:

> From: Jeffrey Haas <jhaas@nexthop.com>
> To: Yakov Rekhter <yakov@juniper.net>
> Cc: idr@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [Idr] Last Call on draft-ietf-idr-rfc2796bis-00.txt
> Message-ID: <20040429224018.F21778@nexthop.com>
> References: <200404162121.i3GLLDJ87448@merlot.juniper.net>
> 
> Additional nits:
> >    Their modification could potential result in routing loops.
> 
> s/potential/potentially/
> 
> In the changes, also note that you corrected transitive to
> non-transitive in the introduction.
> 
> I think ROUTER_ID should be consistently substituted with "BGP Identifier"
> per the current use in draft-ietf-idr-bgp4-23

Ok.

> 
>    one. Using this attribute an RR can identify if the routing
>    information is looped back to the same cluster due to mis-
>    configuration. If the local CLUSTER_ID is found in the CLUSTER_LIST,
> 
> 
> s/is looped/has looped/

Ok.

> 
> Original text:
>    If the BGP Identifiers of two paths are equal when compared in the
>    route selection, then the path with the shorter CLUSTER_LIST length
> 
> Suggested change:
>    The BGP Decision Process Tie Breaking rules (Section 9.1.2.2 of the
>    BGP specification) is modified by inserting the following rule 
>    between f and g:
> 
>    The BGP Speaker SHOULD prefer all routes with the shorter
>    CLUSTER_LIST length.  If no CLUSTER_LIST path attribute is present,
>    the CLUSTER_LIST length is zero.

will revise the text along these lines.

Thanks.  -- Enke

> 
> On Fri, Apr 16, 2004 at 02:21:13PM -0700, Yakov Rekhter wrote:
> > Folks,
> > 
> > During the Last Call it would be greatly appreciated if folks would
> > read the document and comment on it to the IDR mailing list. In
> > other words, we need "yes, looks good" or "should fix this and
> > that", not just silence.
> > 
> > Thanks in advance.
> > 
> > Yakov.
> 
> -- 
> Jeff Haas 
> NextHop Technologies
> 
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