Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2478)
Al Morton <acmorton@att.com> Thu, 19 August 2010 15:33 UTC
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From: Al Morton <acmorton@att.com>
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Subject: Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2478)
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Alfred is right again, Al At 11:12 AM 8/19/2010, RFC Errata System wrote: >The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5938, >"Individual Session Control Feature for the Two-Way Active >Measurement Protocol (TWAMP)". > >-------------------------------------- >You may review the report below and at: >http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5938&eid=2478 > >-------------------------------------- >Type: Editorial >Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de> > >Section: 3.2 and 3.4 > >Original Text >------------- >a) [[ second-to-last para of Section 3.2: ]] > > The Server MUST respond with one or more Start-N-Ack messages (which > SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible). Start-N-Ack messages SHALL >| have the format defined in the next session. > ^^ > >b) [[ last para of Section 3.4: ]] > > The Server MUST respond with one or more Stop-N-Ack messages (which > SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible). Stop-N-Ack messages SHALL >| have the format defined in the next session. > ^^ > >Corrected Text >-------------- >a) > > The Server MUST respond with one or more Start-N-Ack messages (which > SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible). Start-N-Ack messages SHALL >| have the format defined in the next section. > ^^ > >b) > > The Server MUST respond with one or more Stop-N-Ack messages (which > SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible). Stop-N-Ack messages SHALL >| have the format defined in the next section. > ^^ > >Notes >----- >Rationale: potentially confusing typo (iterated)! > >Instructions: >------------- >This errata is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please >use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or >rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party (IESG) >can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. > >-------------------------------------- >RFC5938 (draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-session-cntrl-07) >-------------------------------------- >Title : Individual Session Control Feature for the >Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP) >Publication Date : August 2010 >Author(s) : A. Morton, M. Chiba >Category : PROPOSED STANDARD >Source : IP Performance Metrics >Area : Transport >Stream : IETF >Verifying Party : IESG
- [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2478) RFC Errata System
- Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2… Al Morton
- Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2… Murtaza Chiba (mchiba)
- Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2… Al Morton
- Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2… Alfred Hönes
- Re: [ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2… Lars Eggert