[ippm] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5938 (2478)

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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5938,
"Individual Session Control Feature for the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP)".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5938&eid=2478

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: 3.2 and 3.4

Original Text
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a) [[ second-to-last para of Section 3.2: ]]

   The Server MUST respond with one or more Start-N-Ack messages (which
   SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible).  Start-N-Ack messages SHALL
|  have the format defined in the next session.
                                         ^^

b) [[ last para of Section 3.4: ]]

   The Server MUST respond with one or more Stop-N-Ack messages (which
   SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible).  Stop-N-Ack messages SHALL
|  have the format defined in the next session.
                                         ^^

Corrected Text
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a)

   The Server MUST respond with one or more Start-N-Ack messages (which
   SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible).  Start-N-Ack messages SHALL
|  have the format defined in the next section.
                                         ^^

b)

   The Server MUST respond with one or more Stop-N-Ack messages (which
   SHOULD be sent as quickly as possible).  Stop-N-Ack messages SHALL
|  have the format defined in the next section.
                                         ^^

Notes
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Rationale: potentially confusing typo (iterated)!

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RFC5938 (draft-ietf-ippm-twamp-session-cntrl-07)
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Title               : Individual Session Control Feature for the Two-Way Active Measurement Protocol (TWAMP)
Publication Date    : August 2010
Author(s)           : A. Morton, M. Chiba
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : IP Performance Metrics
Area                : Transport
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG