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Subject: Re: [ippm] WGLC for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang
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On 09/08/2022 17:15, Tommy Pauly wrote:
> Hello IPPM,
>
> This email starts a Working Group Last Call for draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang.
>
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang/
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-ippm-ioam-yang-04.html
>
> Please review this document, and reply to this email to indicate your comments, and if you support publishing this document.

Not ready

no examples

RFC8343, RFC9197 need adding to I-D refs

'Simplified BSD License' is out of date - should be Revised although it 
can be a challenge to get it there

YANG module has lower case 'must' - intended?

leaf profile-name
  length "1 .. max"
that is a very large number of characters

Tom Petch












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