Re: Syntax glitch [Re: Next steps on Extension Header Insertion]

Mark Smith <markzzzsmith@gmail.com> Thu, 27 October 2016 20:22 UTC

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From: Mark Smith <markzzzsmith@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 28 Oct 2016 07:21:37 +1100
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Subject: Re: Syntax glitch [Re: Next steps on Extension Header Insertion]
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On 28 October 2016 at 06:20, Brian E Carpenter
<brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> wrote:
> This is just about a syntax issue and will not affect my response to the survey:
>
>>   Two examples include breaking
>>   the integrity checks provided by the Authentication Header Integrity
>>   [RFC4302], and breaking Path MTU Discovery and can
>>   result in ICMP error messages being sent to the source of the packet
>>   that did not insert the header.
>
> That "and can" doesn't parse for me. I *think* you mean:
>
>   Two examples include breaking
>   the integrity checks provided by the Authentication Header Integrity
>   [RFC4302], and breaking Path MTU Discovery, which can
>   result in ICMP error messages being sent to the source of the packet
>   that did not insert the header.
>

In this text I'd also like to see a mention of operational implications e.g.,

"It will also make troubleshooting harder, as construction of the
entire packet cannot now be reliably attributed to the host assigned
the source address in the packet."

Regards,
Mark.


> Regards
>    Brian
>
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