Re: [Isis-wg] [netmod] FW: New Version Notification for draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00.txt

Hi,

It is great to see new YANG modules proposed for standardization.
It would be even better if the data model is explained in some plain text.
IMO, a YANG tree diagram is not a substitute for a summary of the module.

Many of the data definitions have no description-stmt at all.
(Use pyang -ietf mode to identity the issues.)  Some ISIS protocol
reference-stmts
would also help readers understand this YANG module better.

thanks,
Andy

On Wed, Jun 18, 2014 at 1:53 AM, Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz> wrote:

>
> On 18 Jun 2014, at 10:11, <stephane.litkowski@orange.com> <
> stephane.litkowski@orange.com> wrote:
>
> > Hi Lada,
> >
> > For sure ISIS WG need to be involved, for ownership of the draft, I
> don't really know which WG need to be "owner". Maybe chairs can provide
> their feedback or we could discuss this point in Toronto.
>
> Yes, and I see Juergen has already started this discussion.
>
> > I'm would like to present this first version in both WG if possible.
>
> That's fine and welcome, I think.
>
> >
> > I would be happy to welcome any contributions, so if you have any point
> to raise or if you want to co-author by adding some text, don't hesitate.
>
> To start with, I plan a thorough review of the module, mainly from the
> YANG point of view. My first impressions are quite positive though. :-)
>
> Lada
>
> >
> > Thanks,
> >
> > Stephane
> >
> >
> > -----Original Message-----
> > From: Ladislav Lhotka [mailto:lhotka@nic.cz]
> > Sent: Tuesday, June 17, 2014 18:14
> > To: LITKOWSKI Stephane SCE/IBNF
> > Cc: isis-wg@ietf.org list (isis-wg@ietf.org)
> > Subject: Re: [Isis-wg] FW: New Version Notification for
> draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00.txt
> >
> > Hi Stephane,
> >
> > I am really pleased to see this I-D and the YANG module. I think though
> this work belongs to the ISIS WG where the exposure to routing experts'
> eyes will likely be much higher than in NETMOD. That said, I'd be
> interested in helping you with further development of this module.
> >
> > Thanks, Lada
> >
> > On 17 Jun 2014, at 16:41, <stephane.litkowski@orange.com> <
> stephane.litkowski@orange.com> wrote:
> >
> >> Hi folks,
> >>
> >> FYI and comments ...
> >>
> >> Here is an initial draft proposal for a YANG model for ISIS.
> >>
> >>
> >> Best Regards,
> >>
> >> Stephane
> >>
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: internet-drafts@ietf.org [mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org]
> >> Sent: Tuesday, June 17, 2014 14:20
> >> To: LITKOWSKI Stephane SCE/IBNF; LITKOWSKI Stephane SCE/IBNF
> >> Subject: New Version Notification for
> >> draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00.txt
> >>
> >>
> >> A new version of I-D, draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00.txt
> >> has been successfully submitted by Stephane Litkowski and posted to the
> IETF repository.
> >>
> >> Name:                draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg
> >> Revision:    00
> >> Title:               Yang Data Model for ISIS protocol
> >> Document date:       2014-06-17
> >> Group:               Individual Submission
> >> Pages:               22
> >> URL:
> http://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00.txt
> >> Status:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg/
> >> Htmlized:
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-litkowski-netmod-isis-cfg-00
> >>
> >>
> >> Abstract:
> >>  This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to configure
> >>  and manage ISIS protocol.
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >>
> >> Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of
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> >>
> >> The IETF Secretariat
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