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Re: [Last-Call] [tcpm] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14.txt> (Requirements for Time-Based Loss Detection) to Best Current Practice

t petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Fri, 12 June 2020 15:46 UTC

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Cc: Last Call <last-call@ietf.org>, tcpm <tcpm@ietf.org>, draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider@ietf.org, Martin Duke <martin.h.duke@gmail.com>, tcpm-chairs@ietf.org
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On 12/06/2020 13:59, Mark Allman wrote:
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>> Terminology the boiler plate is out of date
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> ???

<tp>

try  2140bis s.2 para 1
793bis needs updating too

Tom Petch

>> s,2
>> This document is different from from ...
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> fixed
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>> Requirements
>> would be easier to refer to if they were R1, R2a or some such
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> i didn't make a change here; editorial discretion, i guess
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>> a reference for DNS recursive resolver would be good
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> fixed
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>> EWMA needs  expanding on first use
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> fixed
>
> i can push these to a new version whenever.  i'll wait to hear
> stewart's response to martin before doing so, however.
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> thanks,
> allman
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