Re: [Last-Call] [tcpm] Last Call: <draft-ietf-tcpm-rto-consider-14.txt> (Requirements for Time-Based Loss Detection) to Best Current Practice

Mark Allman <mallman@icir.org> Fri, 12 June 2020 17:40 UTC

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(i was confused because i wouldn't call these 'terminology' or
'boilerplate' ... ugh ...)

> try  2140bis s.2 para 1

yeah, i guess i can add an additional cite to draft

> 793bis needs updating too

???

793 nor 793bis is cited, so nothing to update here

allman