Re: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08

wangzitao <wangzitao@huawei.com> Wed, 25 January 2017 02:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08
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Hi GuRong,

Thanks for your comments! It make sense for me, a proper type can reduce the risk of making mistakes.
I would like to discuss with coauthor and may be change it in next version.

Best Regards!
-Michael

发件人: 顾 戎 [mailto:gurong_cmcc@outlook.com]
发送时间: 2017年1月24日 12:40
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主题: RE: WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08


Hi dear all,



After reading this document, here are some tiny comments.

1)      In page 22: The range of MD-level is 0..255, but the type defined here is uint32. Uint8 may be a more reasonable type.

2)      In page 34: The range of packet-size is 64..1000, therefore, I think uint16 may be a more reasonable type.

3)      In page 36: same as the previous comment.



Besides, I support the publication of this document as an RFC.



GuRong

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发件人: Ron Bonica [mailto:rbonica@juniper.net]

发送时间: 2017年1月20日 0:14

收件人: lime@ietf.org<mailto:lime@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model.all@ietf.org>

主题: WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08



Folks,



This message begins a WGLC on draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08. Please submit comments by February 3, 2017.



                                           Ron