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Subject: Re: [Lime] WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08
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Hi dear all,



After reading this document, here are some tiny comments.

1)      In page 22: The range of MD-level is 0..255, but the type defined here is uint32. Uint8 may be a more reasonable type.

2)      In page 34: The range of packet-size is 64..1000, therefore, I think uint16 may be a more reasonable type.

3)      In page 36: same as the previous comment.


Besides, I support the publication of this document as an RFC.


GuRong

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-----邮件原件-----

发件人: Ron Bonica [mailto:rbonica@juniper.net]

发送时间: 2017年1月20日 0:14

收件人: lime@ietf.org<mailto:lime@ietf.org>; draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model.all@ietf.org<mailto:draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model.all@ietf.org>

主题: WGLC: draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08



Folks,



This message begins a WGLC on draft-ietf-lime-yang-oam-model-08. Please submit comments by February 3, 2017.



                                           Ron

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