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Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-dynamic-flooding-13

Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com> Mon, 05 June 2023 17:30 UTC

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From: Acee Lindem <acee.ietf@gmail.com>
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Date: Mon, 05 Jun 2023 13:30:36 -0400
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Subject: Re: [Lsr] Rtgdir last call review of draft-ietf-lsr-dynamic-flooding-13
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Hi Sue, 

Thanks for your review of a fairly large specifying complex functionality required prior IGP expertise. 

Authors, 

Please address Sue’s comments. 

Thanks,
Acee (as document Shepherd) 

> On Jun 5, 2023, at 13:21, Susan Hares via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
> 
> Reviewer: Susan Hares
> Review result: Ready
> 
> The document is written in a clear and concise manner.
> The authors have done an excellent job of making a difficult subject clear and
> readable.
> 
> Two technical sections should be checked against implementations of IS-IS with
> dense flooding (section 6.6.2.1 and section 6.6.2.2.  I am not implementing so
> this check is beyond my capabilities.
> 
> Editorial nit:
> section 3, requirement 3, sentence 2.  "Just addressing a complete bipartite
> topology such as K5, 8 is insufficient."  An informative reference to K5,8 or a
> bipartite topology might be helpful to readers.  This is an optional editorial
> comment.
> 
>

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