RE: [manet] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-manet-timetlv-03

Hi, here some comment.

Typos:
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Page 7: 
4.  if 0 <= a <= 7, and 0 lt;= b <= 31, then the required time-value
                          ^^^

Page 12: typo: 9.1.  Message TLV tyepes
                                   ^             
Page 13: typo: 9.2.  Address Block TLV tyepes
                                         ^             

Terminology used:
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Page 8: 
If t_n is 255, t_default is not used. So this algorithm saves one octet. OK for me.
But t_default doesn't look default at all. Pick another name? 
t_other
t_larger
t_dis255  <= this is meant

That's all;-)

Teco.

> -----Oorspronkelijk bericht-----
> Van: IETF I-D Submission Tool [mailto:idsubmission@ietf.org]
> Verzonden: donderdag 15 november 2007 17:20
> Aan: T.Clausen@computer.org
> CC: chris.dearlove@baesystems.com; manet@ietf.org
> Onderwerp: [manet] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-manet-
> timetlv-03
> 
> 
> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-manet-timetlv-03.txt has been
> successfuly submitted by Thomas Clausen and posted to the IETF
> repository.
> 
> Filename:	 draft-ietf-manet-timetlv
> Revision:	 03
> Title:		 Representing multi-value time in MANETs
> Creation_date:	 2007-11-15
> WG ID:		 manet
> Number_of_pages: 18
> 
> Abstract:
> This document describes a general and flexible TLV (type-length-value
> structure) for representing time using the generalized MANET packet/
> message format.  It defines two message and two address block TLVs
> for representing validity and interval times for MANET routing
> protocols.
> 
> 
> 
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