Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt
"Takeshi Takahashi" <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp> Fri, 11 March 2016 22:55 UTC
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Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt
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Hi Roman, Let me add one more comment. The schema seems to be fine, but the examples described in the draft need to be corrected. The three examples mentioned in Section 7 have <Email> inside <Contact>. The <Email> elements cannot have string value, according to the Email class defined in Section 3.9.3, which says we need to use <EmailTo> to describe the string. Take From: mile [mailto:mile-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Alexey Melnikov Sent: Saturday, February 13, 2016 1:49 AM To: Roman D. Danyliw <rdd@cert.org> Cc: mile@ietf.org Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt Hi Roman, A few quick comments after reviewing the most recent diff: In 2.17: formatid might need a bit more details. Can you provide some examples? In 3.9.4: When one would use "direct" or when "mobile"? Is "direct" referring to a landline number or something else? In 3.21: In EmailHeaderField description: I don't know what is "SMTP header field". I think you should revert the change to make it "email header field" again. Also, it should be "zero or more", not "zero or one". In 3.25.1: FileType - this is just media type name, right?
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Alexey Melnikov
- [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16… internet-drafts
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Roman D. Danyliw
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Alexey Melnikov
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Takeshi Takahashi
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Roman D. Danyliw
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Roman D. Danyliw
- Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bi… Alexey Melnikov