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Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt

Alexey Melnikov <alexey.melnikov@isode.com> Fri, 12 February 2016 16:49 UTC

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Hi Roman,
A few quick comments after reviewing the most recent diff:


In 2.17:

formatid might need a bit more details. Can you provide some examples?

In 3.9.4:

When one would use "direct" or when "mobile"? Is "direct" referring to a landline number or something else?


In 3.21:

In EmailHeaderField description: I don't know what is "SMTP header field". I think you should revert the change to make it "email header field" again.

Also, it should be "zero or more", not "zero or one".

In 3.25.1:

FileType - this is just media type name, right?

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