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Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt

"Roman D. Danyliw" <rdd@cert.org> Mon, 14 March 2016 12:53 UTC

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From: "Roman D. Danyliw" <rdd@cert.org>
To: Takeshi Takahashi <takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp>, 'Alexey Melnikov' <alexey.melnikov@isode.com>
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Hello Take!

Thank you for the feedback.  I'll make the change.

Roman

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Takeshi Takahashi [mailto:takeshi_takahashi@nict.go.jp]
> Sent: Friday, March 11, 2016 5:56 PM
> To: 'Alexey Melnikov' <alexey.melnikov@isode.com>; Roman D. Danyliw
> <rdd@cert.org>
> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> Subject: RE: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt
> 
> Hi Roman,
> 
> Let me add one more comment.
> The schema seems to be fine, but the examples described in the draft need
> to be corrected.
> 
> The three examples mentioned in Section 7 have <Email> inside <Contact>.
> The <Email> elements cannot have string value, according to the Email class
> defined in Section 3.9.3, which says we need to use <EmailTo> to describe
> the string.
> 
> Take
> 
> 
> From: mile [mailto:mile-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Alexey Melnikov
> Sent: Saturday, February 13, 2016 1:49 AM
> To: Roman D. Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
> Cc: mile@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt
> 
> Hi Roman,
> A few quick comments after reviewing the most recent diff:
> 
> 
> In 2.17:
> 
> formatid might need a bit more details. Can you provide some examples?
> 
> In 3.9.4:
> 
> When one would use "direct" or when "mobile"? Is "direct" referring to a
> landline number or something else?
> 
> 
> In 3.21:
> 
> In EmailHeaderField description: I don't know what is "SMTP header field". I
> think you should revert the change to make it "email header field" again.
> 
> Also, it should be "zero or more", not "zero or one".
> 
> In 3.25.1:
> 
> FileType - this is just media type name, right?
> 
>

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