Re: [mile] I-D Action: draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt

"Roman D. Danyliw" <rdd@cert.org> Tue, 02 February 2016 02:44 UTC

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The changelog for this draft is as follows:

** (schema) added XML declaration at the top of the schema
** (text) Improve write-up of @translation-id (Section 2.4)
** (text) Added the EXTENSION type (iodef:ExtensionType) and reference it for AdditionalData , RecordItem, FileProperties  
(Section 2.16)
** (schema) Added ExtensionType@name attribute to name the field (Section 2.16)
** (schema) Made iodef:SoftwareType be a formal UML type, SOFTWARE.  Reference it for Application, Operating System and  
AssociatedSoftware (Section 2.17)
** (text) Defined 0:1 cardinality of IndicatorData in Incident consistent with schema (Section 3.2)
** (text) Fixed type of Incident@observable-id in diagram (Section 3.2)
** (schema) Made @restriction optional in the schema per the text (Section 3.3.1)
** (schema) Redefined PostalAddress, Email, Telephone and Fax for improved internationalization (Section 3.10.2-4) 
** (text) Removed Section 2.12, Person or Organization (PERSON data type) as it was not used
** (text) Removed Section 3.11 that described the time classes (Section 3.11)
** (text) Clarify IntendedImpact (Section 3.14)
** (schema) Consistent cardinality in child classes of RelatedActivity (Section 3.6)
** (schema) Define ThreatActor/{ThreatActorID,Description} as O:M consistently in text, diagram and schema (Section 3.7)
** (schema) Define Campaign/{CampaignID,Description} as 0:M consistently in text, diagram and schema (Section 3.8)
** (schema) Added @ext-dtype to ExtensionType missing from the schema but in the text
** (schema) Added AdditionalData@observable-id attribute (Section 3.9)
** (schema) Redefined SystemImpact, BusinessImpact, IntendedImpact and NodeRole to have a child Description class instead of  
extending iodef:MLStringType per https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/mile/ZFL57YU1nYr2vSobRHd1a-OohJQ (Section 3.13)
** (text) Use Reference as the field name in the description of Method (Section 3.13)
** (text) Fixed formatting of Reference class (Section 3.13.1)
** (text) Use enum:ReferenceName as the field name in the description of Reference (Section 3.13.1)
** (schema) {SystemImpact, BusinessImpact}@type is required with a default of 'unknown' per the text (Section 3.14.1 and  
Section 3.14.2)
** (schema) SystemImpact@{severity,completion} optional per the text (Section 3.14.1)
** (schema) Removed SystemImpact@type="admin" from schema (Section 3.14.1)
** (schema) Added TimeImpact@{ext-metric,ext-duration} to schema per the text (Section 3.14.3)
** (text) Corrected field names in the TimeImpact diagram (Section 3.14.3)
** (schema) Define Confidence as an extension of iodef:PositiveFloatType per the text (Section 3.14.5)
** (schema) Removed inline SystemImpact@completion definition
** (schema) Set System/Node to be 1:1 per the text (Section 3.19)
** (schema) Redefined RelatedDNS to be of type EXTENSION (Section 3.20) (Issue #39)
** (schema) Define Counter to be "xs:float" to be consistent with REAL from UML (Section 3.20)
** (schema) Added Counter@ext-unit missing from the schema but in the text (Section 3.20.3)
** (text) Added missing STRING definition of Address in the class diagram (Section 3.20.1)
** (text) Removed Node/DateTime from the Node diagram (Section 3.20)
** (schema) Removed Node/NodeRole from the schema per the text (Section 3.20)
** (text) Updated diagram of Address to reflect base type (Section 3.20.1)
** (schema) Make Address@category="ipv6-addr" the default (Section 3.20.1)
** (text) Consistent use of "Zero or more" and "One or more" to describe cardinality
** (schema) Removed yes-no-type from schema as it was not used 
** (text) Renamed NodeRole@category="c2" to "c2-server" to make the text consistent with the schema (Section 3.20.2)
** (text) Added translation-id and/or xml:lang to diagrams/text where ML_STRING is used (Section 3.20.2)
** (text) Require that Nameserver/Address@category={"ipv4-addr" or "ipv6-addr"} (Section 3.21.2)
** (schema) Redefined ApplicationHeader to use iodef:ExtensionType and use the protocol information from a parent Service  
class (Section 3.21.2)
** (schema) Redefined EmailHeaderField to use iodef:ExtensionType (section 3.23)
** (text) Clarify cardinality of the classes in Assessment (Section 3.14)
** (text) Added reference to EMAIL data type in definition of EmailFrom (Section 3.24)
** (schema) Added EmailData/EmailTo (Section 3.24)
** (schema) Changed EmailTo, EmailFrom, EmailSubject and EmailX-Mailer to be xs:string (Section 3.24)
** (schema) Reference SignatureData and AssociatedSoftware in File per the text (Section 3.27.1)
** (schema) Added Indicator/AdditionalData per the text (Section 3.31)
** (schema) Added Indicator/{NodeRole, AttackPhase} (Section 3.31)
** (text) Consistent definitions of xml:lang in the text
** (text) Updated description of all ext-* attributes that doesn't include the use of the phrase "escape value"
** (text) Simplified Section 4.3, Validation, by removing the list of parsing considerations
** (text) Ensure all classes that are of defined types (e.g., STRING) reference their data type
** (text) Consistent use of cross references for sub-classes when defining the parent class
** (text) Consistent introduction of the attribute count in the description of a class
** (text) Consistent introduction of the sub-classes in the description of a class
** (text) Consistent documentation of classes that do not have child classes
** (text) Consistent depiction of class diagrams
** (text) Reference the element content of ML_STRING derived classes as STRING
** (schema) Define File/Application as "iodef:Application" (not a nested definition of type="iodef:SoftwareType")
** (schema) Consistent order of recurring attributes (e.g., restriction, observable-id) in all classes
** (text) Removed Paul Stoecker as editor per Chair direction
** (text) reformatted schema to have consistent spacing (Issue #54)

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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
>  This draft is a work item of the Managed Incident Lightweight Exchange
> Working Group of the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : The Incident Object Description Exchange Format v2
>         Author          : Roman Danyliw
> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis-16.txt
> 	Pages           : 163
> 	Date            : 2016-02-01
> 
> Abstract:
>    The Incident Object Description Exchange Format (IODEF) defines a
>    data representation for sharing information commonly exchanged by
>    Computer Security Incident Response Teams (CSIRTs) about computer
>    security incidents.  This document describes the information model
>    for the IODEF and provides an associated data model specified with
>    XML Schema.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-mile-rfc5070-bis/
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