Re: [MMUSIC] BUNDLE TEXT: Offerer procedures (June 6th)

Martin Thomson <martin.thomson@gmail.com> Thu, 06 June 2013 16:42 UTC

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Subject: Re: [MMUSIC] BUNDLE TEXT: Offerer procedures (June 6th)
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Nice work.  I had too many comments to do an email reply properly, so
I've done the whole nasty Word doc thing.

The only big item is that I think that you need to more tightly
control the conditions for a BSO - in most cases, you could label
those BSO as BRO without causing any problems.  Given that limitation,
you could probably eliminate the BRO/BSO labels, which might help with
readability a little.