Re: [mpls] Warren Kumari's No Objection on draft-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11: (with COMMENT)

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Thanks Warren,

I agree with your comments and I will address them in the next revision.
You are right (at least from a theoretical point of view) about fast path vs slow path for ERLD. I think for this kind of switching implementation, we have several options: advertising the fast path ERLD (slow path will never be triggered), advertising the slow path ERLD (there is a possibility that slow path will be triggered for each packet), let this configurable by the user. I do not think that this fast path/slow path implementation is still popular at least for the SP router market.

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Thank you for writing this - it provides useful functionality.

Please see Joe Clarke's OpsDir review here:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-mpls-spring-entropy-label-11-opsdir-lc-clarke-2018-06-25/
 - it mirrors comments made by a number of ADs, and also contains a significnat
number of nits (which would make the document better / more readable).

I had a question:
Section 4.  Entropy Readable Label Depth
" The Entropy Readable Label Depth (ERLD) is defined as the number of
   labels a router can both:
   a.  Read in an MPLS packet received on its incoming interface(s)
       (starting from the top of the stack).
   b.  Use in its load-balancing function."
...
"In a distributed switching architecture, each linecard may have a different
capability in terms of ERLD."

In many cases, a device may have a different readable label depth in hardware /
fastpath than it does by punting the packet to the CPU / control plane. Perhaps
the ERLD should be defined as 'Use in its load-balancing function in the
dataplace / fast-path" (or something, this will need some wording).

I'd also like to say that I like Section 10 (Options considered) - sections
like this make a document much more satisfying (otherwise one has niggling
questions like "What didn't they do single ELs at the bottom of the stack?!") -
thank you for including it.

I also have some nits:
Section 1.  Introduction
"The hashing technique is required to perfom a per-flow load-balancing and thus
prevent packet disordering. " 1: Perform is a type 2: While 'disordering'
explains it well, 'reordering' is a much more common term, and will (I think)
cause less confusion.

"The MPLS architecture brings some challenges on the load-balancing as an LSR
(Label Switch Router) should be able to look at header fields that are beyond
the MPLS label stack." "on the load-balancing" doesn't really parse. Perhaps:
"... brings some load-balancing challenges, as..."?

Section 2.  Abbreviations and Terminology
SRGB is not defined on first use, nor it is in the Terminology section. Also,
sorting this alphabetically would be appreciated.



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