Re: [netconf] WGLC: draft-ietf-netconf-https-notif-06

Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com> Sat, 30 January 2021 22:18 UTC

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Date: Sat, 30 Jan 2021 17:18:29 -0500
From: Reshad Rahman <reshad@yahoo.com>
To: "Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <rwilton=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org>, "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
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Hi,

I've reviewed this document and I think the document will be ready once the changes planned by the authors (regarding notification-messages) are made.

I have a question on the following YANG description. Section 4.1 mentions 'path-absolute' for the URI but the description below says "Relative URI...". Should this description be clarified/corrected or am I missing something?

             augment "transport/tls/tls/http-client-parameters" {
               leaf path {
                 type string;
                 description
                   "Relative URI to the target resource.";
               }
               description
                 "Augmentation to add a path to the target resource.";
             }

Formatting nit:
            Trust anchors (i.e. CA certs) that are used to authenticat\
  e


Regards,
Reshad.

On 2021-01-22, 6:27 AM, "netconf on behalf of Rob Wilton (rwilton)" <netconf-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of rwilton=40cisco.com@dmarc.ietf.org> wrote:

    Just to bump this thread as a reminder that the WGLC finishes in 6 days.

    Please make time to review this document.

    Regards,
    Rob


    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: netconf <netconf-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Rob Wilton (rwilton)
    > Sent: 14 January 2021 13:12
    > To: netconf@ietf.org; draft-ietf-netconf-https-notif@ietf.org
    > Subject: [netconf] WGLC: draft-ietf-netconf-https-notif-06
    > 
    > This message begins a two-week WGLC for draft-ietf-netconf-https-notif-06
    > ending on Jan 28.  Here is a direct link to the HTML version of the draft:
    > 
    > 	https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-https-notif-06
    > 
    > Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is
    > ready for publication", are welcome!  This is useful and important, even
    > from authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at
    > this time.
    > 
    > Please note, the reason that I am making this request rather than the
    > WG chairs is because both chairs are listed as authors on this document.
    > 
    > Thank you,
    > Rob Wilton, OPS AD
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