Re: [netconf] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05

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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net>
CC: "netconf@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default@ietf.org>
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> On Nov 1, 2019, at 10:57, Kent Watsen <kent+ietf@watsen.net> wrote:
> 
> This begins a two-week Working Group Last Call (WGLC) on draft-ietf-netmod-factory-default-05.  The WGLC ends on Nov 15 (two days before the NETCONF 106 session).  Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
> 
> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!  This is useful and important, even from authors.  Objections, concerns, and suggestions are also welcomed at this time.

In general, I think it’s ready to go.  Two nits:

* My name is misspelled in the acknowledgements

* In Section 2:

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2. by vendors using YANG Instance Data […] file format in vendor’s website or other places where off-line document is kept;

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2. by vendors using a file in YANG Instance Data […] format on the vendor’s website or in other places where similar off-line documents are kept;

Joe