Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz> Wed, 13 June 2018 06:52 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
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Hi, just one nit: I noticed that in the example in Figure 10 <error-app-tag> has a mismatched closing XML tag </error-message>. Lada Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com> writes: > Hi Tom, > thank you for your comments. We will address this as we post an updated revision shortly. > Kind regards > --- Alex > >> -----Original Message----- >> From: Netconf [mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of t.petch >> Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2018 3:02 AM >> To: netconf@ietf.org >> Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt >> >> This I-D would appear to have a number of defects in the YANG module. >> >> - no Copyright >> >> - no request to the RFC Editor to update the revision date to the publication date >> >> - no Reference statements for >> import ietf-yang-types { prefix yang;} >> import ietf-subscribed-notifications {prefix sn; } >> import ietf-datastores {prefix ds; } >> import ietf-restconf { prefix rc; >> >> - Restconf is an Informative Reference in the I-D >> >> - no reference in the I-D for yang-types >> >> - I-D references RFC7223 which is obsoleted by RFC8343 >> >> Tom Petch >> >> >> ----- Original Message ----- >> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org> >> To: <i-d-announce@ietf.org> >> Cc: <netconf@ietf.org> >> Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2018 7:50 AM >> >> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts >> directories. >> > This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF. >> > >> > Title : YANG Datastore Subscription >> > Authors : Alexander Clemm >> > Eric Voit >> > Alberto Gonzalez Prieto >> > Ambika Prasad Tripathy >> > Einar Nilsen-Nygaard >> > Andy Bierman >> > Balazs Lengyel >> > Filename : draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt >> > Pages : 54 >> > Date : 2018-05-30 >> > >> > Abstract: >> > Via the mechanism described in this document, subscriber >> applications >> > may request a continuous, customized stream of updates from a YANG >> > datastore. Providing such visibility into changes made upon YANG >> > configuration and operational datastore nodes enables new >> > capabilities based on the remote mirroring of configuration and >> > operational state. >> > >> > >> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is: >> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push/ >> > >> > There are also htmlized versions available at: >> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16 >> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16 >> > >> > A diff from the previous version is available at: >> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16 >> > >> > >> > Please note that it may take a couple of minutes from the time of >> submission >> > until the htmlized version and diff are available at tools.ietf.org. >> > >> > Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at: >> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/ >> > >> > _______________________________________________ >> > I-D-Announce mailing list >> > I-D-Announce@ietf.org >> > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/i-d-announce >> > Internet-Draft directories: http://www.ietf.org/shadow.html or >> > ftp://ftp.ietf.org/ietf/1shadow-sites.txt >> >> _______________________________________________ >> Netconf mailing list >> Netconf@ietf.org >> https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netconf > > _______________________________________________ > Netconf mailing list > Netconf@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/netconf -- Ladislav Lhotka Head, CZ.NIC Labs PGP Key ID: 0xB8F92B08A9F76C67
- Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang… Alexander Clemm
- Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang… Ladislav Lhotka
- Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang… Alexander Clemm
- Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang… t.petch
- [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-pus… internet-drafts