Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt

Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz> Wed, 13 June 2018 06:52 UTC

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From: Ladislav Lhotka <lhotka@nic.cz>
To: Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com>, "t.petch" <ietfc@btconnect.com>, "netconf\@ietf.org" <netconf@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
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Hi,

just one nit: I noticed that in the example in Figure 10
<error-app-tag> has a mismatched closing XML tag </error-message>.

Lada

Alexander Clemm <alexander.clemm@huawei.com> writes:

> Hi Tom,
> thank you for your comments.  We will address this as we post an updated revision shortly.
> Kind regards
> --- Alex
>
>> -----Original Message-----
>> From: Netconf [mailto:netconf-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of t.petch
>> Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2018 3:02 AM
>> To: netconf@ietf.org
>> Subject: Re: [Netconf] I-D Action: draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
>> 
>> This I-D would appear to have a number of defects in the YANG module.
>> 
>> - no Copyright
>> 
>> - no request to the RFC Editor to update the revision date to the publication date
>> 
>> - no Reference statements for
>>      import ietf-yang-types { prefix yang;}
>>      import ietf-subscribed-notifications {prefix sn;  }
>>      import ietf-datastores {prefix ds; }
>>      import ietf-restconf   { prefix rc;
>> 
>> - Restconf is an Informative Reference in the I-D
>> 
>> - no reference in the I-D for yang-types
>> 
>> - I-D references RFC7223 which is obsoleted by RFC8343
>> 
>> Tom Petch
>> 
>> 
>> ----- Original Message -----
>> From: <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
>> To: <i-d-announce@ietf.org>
>> Cc: <netconf@ietf.org>
>> Sent: Thursday, May 31, 2018 7:50 AM
>> 
>> > A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
>> directories.
>> > This draft is a work item of the Network Configuration WG of the IETF.
>> >
>> >         Title           : YANG Datastore Subscription
>> >         Authors         : Alexander Clemm
>> >                           Eric Voit
>> >                           Alberto Gonzalez Prieto
>> >                           Ambika Prasad Tripathy
>> >                           Einar Nilsen-Nygaard
>> >                           Andy Bierman
>> >                           Balazs Lengyel
>> > Filename        : draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16.txt
>> > Pages           : 54
>> > Date            : 2018-05-30
>> >
>> > Abstract:
>> >    Via the mechanism described in this document, subscriber
>> applications
>> >    may request a continuous, customized stream of updates from a YANG
>> >    datastore.  Providing such visibility into changes made upon YANG
>> >    configuration and operational datastore nodes enables new
>> >    capabilities based on the remote mirroring of configuration and
>> >    operational state.
>> >
>> >
>> > The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push/
>> >
>> > There are also htmlized versions available at:
>> > https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
>> > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
>> >
>> > A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-16
>> >
>> >
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