Re: [Netconf] Last Call on yang-push-17

I have not reviewed the entire document, but have looked at the Security Considerations section.

The document follows the template defined in OPS-Dir wiki here <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/ops/wiki/yang-security-guidelines>, but there is a reference in the template that needs to be updated.

s/NETCONF access control model/Network Configuration Access Control Model (NACM)/

Also, can the list of subtrees and data nodes that are sensitive/vulnerable be made a bulleted list. The first item on that list is not one of the nodes. Can it not be intended or moved into the description before the list?

Thanks.

> On Aug 14, 2018, at 10:28 AM, Kent Watsen <kwatsen@juniper.net> wrote:
> 
> This message starts a Last Call on draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-17:
> 
>  https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push-17
> 
> 
> This marks the beginning of the last calls on the yang push suite of drafts.
> Given the size and number of documents, the chairs decided to break the 
> reviews up into pieces so as to get focus on each in turn.  We are choosing
> to go top-down, starting with yang-push and ending with the "notif" drafts.
> We plan to submit the drafts for publication when they are ready as a 
> collective.  The goal is to do all this prior to IETF 103.
> 
> We understand that, in reviewing yang-push, there is a need to consider the
> subscribed-notifications draft.  We will not be surprised if, in the course
> of things, both drafts are updated, even though the review is primarily on
> the yang-push draft.
> 
> While it's always nice to receive messages of support, at this time, the
> question isn't so much if the working group supports the work, than if
> the document is ready to progress.  The chairs need to see reviews that
> indicate thorough end-to-end reading of the text.  Of course, if there
> are any objections, these should be brought forward now as well.
> 
> The current version (-17) of this draft was published on July 1st, just
> before the IETF 102 meeting.  The datatracker page for the draft is here:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-netconf-yang-push.
> 
> 
> Thanks,
> Kent (and Mahesh)
> 
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Mahesh Jethanandani
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