Re: [Netconf] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC6241 (4856)

[Juergen Schoenwaelder <[e-mail]>]

I think this is not needed. I am not sure what the wording change is
trying to fix, I do not see how the new wording would be a significant
improvement. If the 'by one of' is considered problematic, then I would
just remove it.

 config:  A hierarchy of configuration data as defined by 
           the device's data models.  The contents MUST be placed in an

/js

On Mon, Dec 19, 2016 at 11:57:57AM +0100, Benoit Claise wrote:
> Dear all,
> 
> Please let me know what you think of this errata.
> 
> Regards, Benoit.
> > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6241,
> > "Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF)".
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > You may review the report below and at:
> > http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6241&eid=4856
> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > Type: Technical
> > Reported by: frank feng <[e-mail]>
> > 
> > Section: 7.2
> > 
> > Original Text
> > -------------
> > config:  A hierarchy of configuration data as defined by one of
> >           the device's data models.  The contents MUST be placed in an
> >           appropriate namespace, to allow the device to detect the
> >           appropriate data model, and the contents MUST follow the
> >           constraints of that data model, as defined by its capability
> >           definition.  Capabilities are discussed in Section 8.
> > 
> > Corrected Text
> > --------------
> > config:  A hierarchy of configuration data as defined by one or more of
> >           the device's data models.  The contents MUST be placed in an
> >           appropriate namespace, to allow the device to detect the
> >           appropriate data model, and the contents MUST follow the
> >           constraints of that data model, as defined by its capability
> >           definition.  Capabilities are discussed in Section 8.
> > 
> > Notes
> > -----
> > 
> > 
> > Instructions:
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> > 
> > --------------------------------------
> > RFC6241 (draft-ietf-netconf-4741bis-10)
> > --------------------------------------
> > Title               : Network Configuration Protocol (NETCONF)
> > Publication Date    : June 2011
> > Author(s)           : R. Enns, Ed., M. Bjorklund, Ed., J. Schoenwaelder, Ed., A. Bierman, Ed.
> > Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> > Source              : Network Configuration
> > Area                : Operations and Management
> > Stream              : IETF
> > Verifying Party     : IESG
> > .
> > 
> 

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