Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15

> On Jan 17, 2018, at 2:49 PM, Juergen Schoenwaelder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> wrote:
> 
> Paging through the document, I found the following:
> 
> - The main module uses YANG 1.1, others modules use YANG 1.0. I think
>  it makes sense to generally use YANG 1.1. (The packet header module
>  may not need YANG 1.1 but then the main module is YANG 1.1 anyway.)

Will update.

> 
> - Since YANG 1.1 is used, the references to RFC6020 should be replaced
>  with references to RFC 7950.

Will update.

> 
> - The security consideration needs to be updated to follow the newer
>  template (which also covers RESTCONF).

Will add.

> 
> - There is an open issue in the document (section 8) - are we going
>  to resolve that during WG last call or is this a leftover?

This will be resolved in the next version of the module. It is documented under Issues tab in GitHub. Should we remove it from the draft?

> 
> - There are references to RFCs in the YANG modules (in reference
>  statement) that must also be listed in the text and added to the
>  references section. This is why you usually find text of the form
> 
>    This YANG module imports types from [RFC...] and references
>    [RFC...], [RFC...], and [RFC…].

Will add.

> 
> /js
> 
> On Wed, Jan 17, 2018 at 09:55:04PM +0000, Kent Watsen wrote:
>> All,
>> 
>> This starts a two-week working group last call on
>> draft-ietf-netmod-acl-model-15.
>> 
>> This working group last call ends on January 31st.
>> Please send your comments to the NETMOD mailing list.
>> 
>> Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document
>> and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
>> This is useful and important, even from authors.
>> 
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>> 
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