Re: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

[Italo Busi <[e-mail]>]

Hi all,

I have reviewed the document and I support its publication as an RFC

I have just few (related) minor comments which can be easily fixed during WG LC process

1) Section 7.2.1 (Folding for Single Backslash Strategy) says:

   Ensure that the desired maximum line length is not less than the
   minimum header, which is 46 characters.  If the desired maximum line
   length is less than this minimum, exit (this text-based content
   cannot be folded).

However, the first line defined in section 7.1.1 is a "45-character string".
I think that the paragraph be changed as:

   Ensure that the desired maximum line length is not less than the
   minimum header, which is 45 characters.  If the desired maximum line
   length is less than this minimum, exit (this text-based content
   cannot be folded).

2) Section 8.2.1 (Folding for Double Backslash Strategy) says:


   Ensure that the desired maximum line length is not less than the
   minimum header, which is 45 characters.  If the desired maximum line
   length is less than this minimum, exit (this text-based content
   cannot be folded).

However, the first line defined in section 8.1.1 is a "46-character string".
I think that the paragraph be changed as:

   Ensure that the desired maximum line length is not less than the
   minimum header, which is 46 characters.  If the desired maximum line
   length is less than this minimum, exit (this text-based content
   cannot be folded).

A question for clarification. Reading the following code in Appendix A:

     if [[ $strategy -eq 2 ]]; then
       min_supported=`expr ${#hdr_txt_2} + 8`
     else
       min_supported=`expr ${#hdr_txt_1} + 8`
     fi

It seems to me that the minimum lengths applied by the code in Appendix A are be 53 and 54 (instead of 45 and 46 respectively)

Is my understanding correct?

Thanks, Italo

-----Original Message-----
From: Lou Berger [mailto:[e-mail]] 
Sent: domenica 12 maggio 2019 23:20
To: NetMod WG <[e-mail]>
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Subject: [netmod] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02


All,

This starts a two-week working group last call for
draft-ietf-netmod-artwork-folding-02

The working group last call ends on May 27.
Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.

Positive comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome!
This is useful and important, even from authors.

Thank you,
NetMod Chairs