[netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> Thu, 04 October 2018 02:43 UTC

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Subject: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-??
Reviewer: Joel Halpern
Review Date: 2018-10-03
IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29
IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11

Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication
as a proposed standard.

Major issues:
    It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been
    involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite
    unclear and confusing.   For somewhat more details, please see my previous
    review at
    https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/

Minor issues:
    N/A

Nits/editorial comments:
    N/A

[netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-net… Joel Halpern
Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Martin Bjorklund
Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf… Joel M. Halpern
Re: [netmod] [Gen-art] Genart telechat review of … Alissa Cooper