Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11

Martin Bjorklund <mbj@tail-f.com> Thu, 04 October 2018 10:06 UTC

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Subject: Re: [netmod] Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-11
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Hi,

Joel Halpern <jmh@joelhalpern.com> wrote:
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review result: Ready with Issues
> 
> I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
> Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
> by the IESG for the IETF Chair. Please wait for direction from your
> document shepherd or AD before posting a new version of the draft.
> 
> For more information, please see the FAQ at
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> <https://trac.ietf.org/trac/gen/wiki/GenArtfaq>.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-??
> Reviewer: Joel Halpern
> Review Date: 2018-10-03
> IETF LC End Date: 2018-06-29
> IESG Telechat date: 2018-10-11
> 
> Summary: This document seems to meet the specific requirements for publication
> as a proposed standard.
> 
> Major issues:
>     It is still this reviewer's opinion that for a reader who has not been
>     involved in the discussion in the working group, the document is quite
>     unclear and confusing.   For somewhat more details, please see my previous
>     review at
>     https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-netmod-schema-mount-10-genart-lc-halpern-2018-06-28/

I'm sorry to hear that you find it confusing.  I was under the
impression that the edits that we made after your previous review were
sufficient.


/martin



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> Minor issues:
>     N/A
> 
> Nits/editorial comments:
>     N/A
> 
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