Re: [nfsv4] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8881 (6308)

Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> Tue, 20 October 2020 13:56 UTC

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From: Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com>
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Hi,

Authors, can you please comment on this Errata. Appears a straight forward one
to verify if it correct.

/Magnus

On Fri, 2020-10-16 at 15:00 -0700, RFC Errata System wrote:
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8881,
> "Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1 Protocol".
> 
> --------------------------------------
> You may review the report below and at:
> 
https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=ab0db258-f5ad0836-ab0df2c3-86b1886cfa64-24ef43ab44e776da&q=1&e=84f54505-cd2c-40e6-a5e7-27c22813adc1&u=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Feid6308
> 
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Technical
> Reported by: Calum Mackay <calum.mackay@oracle.com>
> 
> Section: 18.32.3
> 
> Original Text
> -------------
>    *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
>       that committed.
> 
> 
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
>       that requested.
> 
> 
> Notes
> -----
> The meaning is probably obvious, but perhaps a MUST ought
> to be unambiguous?
> 
> ---
> 
> editorial: also, the point above this one uses the word "stronger"
> where this point uses "high", both for the stability level.
> 
> The two lines should probably use the same word.
> 
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> 
> --------------------------------------
> RFC8881 (draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-04)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1
> Protocol
> Publication Date    : August 2020
> Author(s)           : D. Noveck, Ed., C. Lever
> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
> Source              : Network File System Version 4
> Area                : Transport
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG