[nfsv4] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8881 (6308)

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Subject: [nfsv4] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8881 (6308)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8881,
"Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1 Protocol".

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You may review the report below and at:
https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid6308

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Type: Technical
Reported by: Calum Mackay <calum.mackay@oracle.com>

Section: 18.32.3

Original Text
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   *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
      that committed.


Corrected Text
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   *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
      that requested.


Notes
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The meaning is probably obvious, but perhaps a MUST ought
to be unambiguous?

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editorial: also, the point above this one uses the word "stronger"
where this point uses "high", both for the stability level.

The two lines should probably use the same word.

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RFC8881 (draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-04)
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Title               : Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1 Protocol
Publication Date    : August 2020
Author(s)           : D. Noveck, Ed., C. Lever
Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
Source              : Network File System Version 4
Area                : Transport
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG