Re: [nfsv4] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8881 (6308)

Chuck Lever <chuck.lever@oracle.com> Tue, 20 October 2020 14:54 UTC

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Date: Tue, 20 Oct 2020 10:52:38 -0400
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Subject: Re: [nfsv4] [Technical Errata Reported] RFC8881 (6308)
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Hi Magnus-

I asked Calum to file this for the WG to verify.
It looks like a valid comment to me.


> On Oct 20, 2020, at 9:56 AM, Magnus Westerlund <magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> wrote:
> 
> Hi,
> 
> Authors, can you please comment on this Errata. Appears a straight forward one
> to verify if it correct.
> 
> /Magnus
> 
> On Fri, 2020-10-16 at 15:00 -0700, RFC Errata System wrote:
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC8881,
>> "Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1 Protocol".
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> 
> https://protect2.fireeye.com/v1/url?k=ab0db258-f5ad0836-ab0df2c3-86b1886cfa64-24ef43ab44e776da&q=1&e=84f54505-cd2c-40e6-a5e7-27c22813adc1&u=https%3A%2F%2Fwww.rfc-editor.org%2Ferrata%2Feid6308
>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Technical
>> Reported by: Calum Mackay <calum.mackay@oracle.com>
>> 
>> Section: 18.32.3
>> 
>> Original Text
>> -------------
>>   *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
>>      that committed.
>> 
>> 
>> Corrected Text
>> --------------
>>   *  The server MUST commit the data at a level at least as high as
>>      that requested.
>> 
>> 
>> Notes
>> -----
>> The meaning is probably obvious, but perhaps a MUST ought
>> to be unambiguous?
>> 
>> ---
>> 
>> editorial: also, the point above this one uses the word "stronger"
>> where this point uses "high", both for the stability level.
>> 
>> The two lines should probably use the same word.
>> 
>> Instructions:
>> -------------
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>> 
>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC8881 (draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc5661sesqui-msns-04)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Network File System (NFS) Version 4 Minor Version 1
>> Protocol
>> Publication Date    : August 2020
>> Author(s)           : D. Noveck, Ed., C. Lever
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Network File System Version 4
>> Area                : Transport
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG

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Chuck Lever