Re: [Ntp] WGLC: draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps

Denis Reilly <denis.reilly@orolia.com> Thu, 06 December 2018 16:13 UTC

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From: Denis Reilly <denis.reilly@orolia.com>
To: Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org>, "ntp@ietf.org" <ntp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Ntp] WGLC: draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps
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Hello!

I have read the NTP Packet timestamps draft and believe it is ready for submission, subject to my one minor nit, below:

In Section 6.1 and 6.2, the draft references an earlier version of itself (draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps-03) as an informative reference. Shouldn’t it just refer directly to itself as a section link?

In particular, Section 2 reads:
      The timestamp format used in this specification is the PTP
      [IEEE1588] Truncated format, as specified in Section 4.2.3 of
      [I-D.ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps].

However, Section 4.2.3 doesn’t exist, either in this draft or in the referenced -03 draft. This reference should be corrected.

Best Regards,

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From: ntp <ntp-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Karen O'Donoghue
Sent: Friday, November 30, 2018 3:38 PM
To: ntp@ietf.org
Subject: Re: [Ntp] WGLC: draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps

Folks,

After receiving a few requests, I am going to extend this WGLC for one week. Please submit comments by COB on Friday 7 December. Even if you don’t have any comments, please indicate to the mailing list that you have read the draft and you believe it is ready for submission to the IESG. This is critical to helping the chairs determine working group consensus on this document.

Regards,
Karen


On Nov 6, 2018, at 2:52 AM, Karen O'Donoghue <odonoghue@isoc.org<mailto:odonoghue@isoc.org>> wrote:

Folks,

This message initiates a three plus week working group last call for:

Guidelines for Defining Packet Timestamps
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-ntp-packet-timestamps

Please review the referenced document and send any comments to the mailing list including your assessment of whether this document is mature enough to proceed to the IESG. Please note that these messages of support for progression to the mailing list will be used to determine WG consensus to proceed.

Please send all comments in by COB on Friday 30 November. I realize this is a bit longer than normal but we are coming out of an IETF week and heading into the Thanksgiving holiday in the US.

Thanks!
Karen and Dieter



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