Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (3446)

Stephen Farrell <stephen.farrell@cs.tcd.ie> Wed, 09 January 2013 23:25 UTC

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Cc: Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org>, nov@matake.jp, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, OAuth WG <oauth@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [OAUTH-WG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6749 (3446)
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On 01/09/2013 11:02 PM, Derek Atkins wrote:
> Barry Leiba <barryleiba@computer.org> writes:
> 
>>> Corrected Text
>>> --------------
>>> Resource owners cannot revoke access to an individual third party without revoking access
>>> to all third parties, and must do so by changing their password.
>>>
>>> Notes
>>> -----
>>> The text was originally "their" but changed to "the third party's" between the last draft and RFC.
>>> However, "their" means "resource owners'", not "the third party's".
>>
>> Yes, this appears to be a change the RFC Editor made that the authors
>> didn't notice in AUTH48.  But the RFC Editor change it from "their"
>> because "their" wasn't clear.  Changing it back to "their" won't help
>> that.  I suggest editing the corrected text to "by changing the
>> resource owner's password" before marking this as Verified.
> 
> Yep, I suggested that same change in a private email to Stephen, so I
> would prefer this modification.

Ok, assuming nobody objects I'll verify this that way tomorrow.

Cheers,
S

> 
>> Barry
> 
> -derek
>