Re: [OPSAWG] please see draft-lear-opsawg-ol on licensing

Eliot Lear <lear@lear.ch> Fri, 28 May 2021 16:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] please see draft-lear-opsawg-ol on licensing
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Hi Tom,

On 28.05.21 17:52, tom petch wrote:
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> <tp>
> Well-formed I-D should explain how they update what they claim to update.  This one does, sort of, in the Introduction.  What is missing is text such as
> Section.x.y of RFC8520 is updated to include the following paragraph
> "Those generating MUD files SHOULD use the owner-license [RFCxxxx] extension unless ...2

What the draft says:

 > Those generating MUD files SHOULD use this extension, and thus this 
extension updates RFC 8520.

Regarding the words, "extends" or "updates", I have no horse in that race.

Eliot