Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (7258)

Randy Presuhn <randy_presuhn@alumni.stanford.edu> Fri, 02 December 2022 00:01 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (7258)
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Hi -

There *is* an issue - the first two possible values spelled out
in the DESCRIPTION clause do not match the enumerated SYNTAX
values' labels.

Randy

On 2022-12-01 1:46 PM, Chris Smiley wrote:
> 
> Greetings,
> 
> FYI - this report has been deleted as junk.
> 
> Thank you.
> 
> RFC Editor/cs
> 
>> On Nov 30, 2022, at 6:26 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:
>>
>> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7666,
>> "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor".
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> You may review the report below and at:
>> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7258
>>
>> --------------------------------------
>> Type: Editorial
>> Reported by: Dana Renee Hopkins <unpproductions@gmail.com>
>>
>> Section: 3233702267
>>
>> Original Text
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>> RFC 7666, "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor", October 2015
>> Source of RFC: opsawg (ops)
>> Found 1 record.
>>
>> Errata ID: 4710
>> Status: Verified
>> Type: Editorial
>> Publication Format(s) : TEXT
>> Reported By: jean-marie Kubek
>> Date Reported: 2016-06-15
>> Verifier Name: Benoit Claise
>> Date Verified: 2016-06-17
>> Section 6.2 IANA MIB says:
>>
>> IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION
>>        STATUS       current
>>        DESCRIPTION
>>                "The media type of a storage device:
>>
>>                unknown(1)     The media type is unknown, e.g., because
>>                               the implementation failed to obtain the
>>                               media type from the hypervisor.
>>
>>                other(2)       The media type is other than those
>>                               defined in this conversion.
>> It should say:
>>
>> IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION
>>        STATUS       current
>>        DESCRIPTION
>>                "The media type of a storage device:
>>
>>                  other(1)       The media type is other than those
>>                                 defined in this conversion.
>>
>>                  unknown(2)     The media type is unknown, e.g., because
>>                                 the implementation failed to obtain the
>>                                 media type from the hypervisor.
>>
>> Notes:
>>
>> Inversion of other and unknown integer values in the description of the IANAStorageMediaType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION.
>>
>> FIrst referenced at IANA RT as [IANA #913286] Incoherency in IANA-STORAGE-MEDIA-TYPE-MIB
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>> It's not the right document
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>> --------------------------------------
>> RFC7666 (draft-ietf-opsawg-vmm-mib-04)
>> --------------------------------------
>> Title               : Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor
>> Publication Date    : October 2015
>> Author(s)           : H. Asai, M. MacFaden, J. Schoenwaelder, K. Shima, T. Tsou
>> Category            : PROPOSED STANDARD
>> Source              : Operations and Management Area Working Group
>> Area                : Operations and Management
>> Stream              : IETF
>> Verifying Party     : IESG
>>
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