Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (7258)
Randy Presuhn <randy_presuhn@alumni.stanford.edu> Fri, 02 December 2022 00:01 UTC
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (7258)
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Hi - There *is* an issue - the first two possible values spelled out in the DESCRIPTION clause do not match the enumerated SYNTAX values' labels. Randy On 2022-12-01 1:46 PM, Chris Smiley wrote: > > Greetings, > > FYI - this report has been deleted as junk. > > Thank you. > > RFC Editor/cs > >> On Nov 30, 2022, at 6:26 PM, RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote: >> >> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC7666, >> "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor". >> >> -------------------------------------- >> You may review the report below and at: >> https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7258 >> >> -------------------------------------- >> Type: Editorial >> Reported by: Dana Renee Hopkins <unpproductions@gmail.com> >> >> Section: 3233702267 >> >> Original Text >> ------------- >> Search RFCs >> number, title, keyword, or author surname >> Advanced Search >> RFC Editor >> RFC Errata >> RFC 7666, "Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor", October 2015 >> Source of RFC: opsawg (ops) >> Found 1 record. >> >> Errata ID: 4710 >> Status: Verified >> Type: Editorial >> Publication Format(s) : TEXT >> Reported By: jean-marie Kubek >> Date Reported: 2016-06-15 >> Verifier Name: Benoit Claise >> Date Verified: 2016-06-17 >> Section 6.2 IANA MIB says: >> >> IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION >> STATUS current >> DESCRIPTION >> "The media type of a storage device: >> >> unknown(1) The media type is unknown, e.g., because >> the implementation failed to obtain the >> media type from the hypervisor. >> >> other(2) The media type is other than those >> defined in this conversion. >> It should say: >> >> IANAStorageMediaType ::= TEXTUAL-CONVENTION >> STATUS current >> DESCRIPTION >> "The media type of a storage device: >> >> other(1) The media type is other than those >> defined in this conversion. >> >> unknown(2) The media type is unknown, e.g., because >> the implementation failed to obtain the >> media type from the hypervisor. >> >> Notes: >> >> Inversion of other and unknown integer values in the description of the IANAStorageMediaType TEXTUAL-CONVENTION. >> >> FIrst referenced at IANA RT as [IANA #913286] Incoherency in IANA-STORAGE-MEDIA-TYPE-MIB >> >> Search for errata for other RFCs. >> >> Report New Errata >> >> >> >> IAB • IANA • IETF • IRTF • ISE • ISOC • IETF Trust >> Reports • Privacy Statement • Site Map • Contact Us >> >> >> Document Retrieval >> Errata >> Frequently Asked Questions >> Future Format FAQ >> History >> About Us >> Other Information >> Publication Process >> Publication Queue >> Style Guide >> Advanced Search >> number, title, keyword, or author surname >> >> >> Corrected Text >> -------------- >> Enclosure >> >> Notes >> ----- >> It's not the right document >> >> Instructions: >> ------------- >> This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". If necessary, please >> use "Reply All" to discuss whether it should be verified or >> rejected. When a decision is reached, the verifying party >> can log in to change the status and edit the report, if necessary. >> >> -------------------------------------- >> RFC7666 (draft-ietf-opsawg-vmm-mib-04) >> -------------------------------------- >> Title : Management Information Base for Virtual Machines Controlled by a Hypervisor >> Publication Date : October 2015 >> Author(s) : H. Asai, M. MacFaden, J. Schoenwaelder, K. Shima, T. Tsou >> Category : PROPOSED STANDARD >> Source : Operations and Management Area Working Group >> Area : Operations and Management >> Stream : IETF >> Verifying Party : IESG >> > > _______________________________________________ > OPSAWG mailing list > OPSAWG@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/opsawg
- [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 (725… RFC Errata System
- Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 … Chris Smiley
- Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 … Randy Presuhn
- Re: [OPSAWG] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC7666 … Jürgen Schönwälder