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John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> Wed, 20 December 2023 01:46 UTC

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From: John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net>
To: Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com>
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Please and thank you. 

—John

> On Dec 19, 2023, at 8:41 PM, Sean Turner <sean@sn3rd.com> wrote:
> 
> [External Email. Be cautious of content]
> 
> 
> John,
> 
> Now that the I-D has been placed on the 1/4 telechat should I spin a new version that incorporates the  outstanding PRs:
> https://urldefense.com/v3/__https://github.com/ietf-wg-pce/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/pulls__;!!NEt6yMaO-gk!C1CkLmJEflB_yG5NzS23pvZunYM61_KOufCqnD3aLWVaJZDL5UwvsYUQm373Q10IaWGT6mz5MA$
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> spt
> 
>> On Dec 5, 2023, at 12:03, John Scudder <jgs@juniper.net> wrote:
>> 
>> Hi Authors,
>> 
>> Thanks for this document. Looks good, I've requested IETF last call.
>> 
>> A couple of notes below, they didn't seem worth holding up the last call for, but please consider them for your next revision.
>> 
>> - "what PCEPS implementations do if a PCEPS supports more than one version". I don't think PCEPS (second occurrence) takes an article (i.e. referring to "a PCEPS" is weird). Some rewrite seems called for, perhaps s/a PCEPS/one/.
>> 
>> - "neither the PCC nor the PCE should establish a PCEPS with
>>  TLS connection with an unknown, unexpected, or incorrectly identified
>>  peer;"
>> 
>> Isn't "PCEPS with TLS" redundant, doesn't the ess in PCEPS imply TLS? In which case, just drop "with TLS". (See also, "ATM machine" :-)
>> 
>> Thanks,
>> 
>> —John
>

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